I can see that you were able to summarise the key events from the text we read - ka pai. I also liked your explanation about why people protest. Next time lets add a little more detail to our answers.
Kia Ora Madi. My name is Georgia S I am a year 8 and Head Girl at Belfast School. I really liked your work- Kai Pai! Maybe next time you could add some more detail to your paragraghs. I loved how you explained why people protest- Good Job! 👍
Heres a link to my blog if you want to check it out- https://bssgeorgias.blogspot.com/
Hi Madi,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you were able to summarise the key events from the text we read - ka pai. I also liked your explanation about why people protest. Next time lets add a little more detail to our answers.
Kia Ora Madi.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Georgia S I am a year 8 and Head Girl at Belfast School. I really liked your work- Kai Pai! Maybe next time you could add some more detail to your paragraghs. I loved how you explained why people protest- Good Job! 👍
Heres a link to my blog if you want to check it out- https://bssgeorgias.blogspot.com/