Waitangi writing

WALT: use the structure of a recount to write about a holiday highlight.

On waitangi day it was my aunts birthday.At first the lady’s went out to a restaurant to go eat, and the kids were just playing. When they got back they went inside to go talk about stuff.Next we were still playing and my uncles were doing the BBQ, and the kids put there togs on and went in the pool. But it got so cold and all of us had a hot shower.After that we ate, and the food was so good and the all of the kids went to the park and played and we came back and watched movies.Overall, we just went to sleep and it was a really fun day.

Task description.
On Thursday, last week. Mr Goodwin made us a document to write a recount. We learned how to use Order of events. We wrote about what we did in Waitangi day. Like if we learned about what Waiting day is.

Order of events eg: "At first..." or "Next we..."