WALT: paint an image in the readers mind.
Tree Trunks
I see beautiful tree trunks and the pretty sun shining through the trees with a lovely bright
wakening to the start of the morning.
When you walk through each path that has fresh nature.
wakening to the start of the morning.
When you walk through each path that has fresh nature.
Leaves
The leaves have fallen from the trees and has nice color to it. With a very very
pretty touch to it with light green
pretty touch to it with light green
Grass
The grass is blooming with some sticks and leaves that fell from the beautiful trees
made from mother nature.
made from mother nature.
Imagination
As I walk through the nice tree trunks and the pretty leaves falling from the sky and the
beautiful grass shines bright with the sun and the clouds all made by mother nature.
beautiful grass shines bright with the sun and the clouds all made by mother nature.
Hey Maddison, it's Toby.
ReplyDeleteI reckon' you've done an excellent job of painting an image in someones mind and I can see that you have easily achieved that. I also liked the way you described some of the parts of mother nature and how you've made it sound so beautiful and calm where in some places it's terrible and there's a huge storm tearing everything apart. How would you describe the exact opposite of all this if you were to write about it?
Keep It Up!
Kind Regards,
Toby